Good job, but too short.
This animation packs a lot of potential, and the idea is really good!
But I am sad now:( You didn't make it long enough.. I would like to see the whole song animated by you:) The whole flash was clean, and neat. I hope you extend this:)
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You are right, it is too short, thanks for the great compliment though. :D
It's a bit random..
My opinion is that if it's a bunch of unfinished stuff.. Don't submit it, really. Finish it first, I guess, or just leave it. It is too random.. Sorry for being harsh, but the only thing I like out of this flash is the beginning, the RESPRiT part..
THAT WAS SO EASY TO DO.
It was a cute flash.
I liked it.. Was cute :3 But I think the ending is too abrupt, it just stops when the synth comes in.. :| Good job on it though! For what you are going for, it's good enough, although the animation lacks a bit IMO.
Thanks for making this!
Definetely gonna use this often:) love the afterhours.fm stream! What you could've improved is like.. Use a font instead of drawed letters. It looks a bit cluttered this way. But aside from that, no criticism! You rock! :D
Thanks! So you made an alt account eh? Lol niiccee.
I am coming out with a 2nd version BTW so it will have like 50 options.
Brutal track man. Please tell me when you are releasing this, I so direly need this track :) I'll buy this. Great basswork, and lovely drums. I have no words for this track.
I'm Alex. lol.
Great track, sounds very pulsating and dark in the beginning, the atmospheric pads there are very good. Then the choirs start.. I like them, but not a lot. They're good, but in my opinion they could have been a bit fuller.. A very slight chorus or a bit of reverb on them might help. The transition from the choirs to the xylophone is nothing really special...
But what comes after that makes more than up for that, the choirs work really good here! Sounds a bit like a cyan monkey with the xylophone still in there, lol.
The bass you put in after that is delicious, really sets a dark mood. I like the ending, even if you're not really satisfied with it.
I really think you did a great job on this one, the only thing I might add is a bit more variation and breaks in the percussion department, but apart from that, you did a mighty fine job on projecting a cyan monkey into sound.
Keep it up, and check out my new track "Rip" if you have the time. Drop me a line.
Sweet review! Thanks Alex. (lol, hehe.)
I wanted some variation in the percussion on this one aswell, especially when the xylophone comes in I wanted a lighter kick but that turned out rather aweful and after a few weeks I thought I would finally submit it.
But cheers for the detailed review, helps a lot. :-D
My opinion is..
.. you should not "Envify" it, but continue it as it is now. Add some pads or strings, and this will really work out well.
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