Hey Alex.
I'm Alex. lol.
Great track, sounds very pulsating and dark in the beginning, the atmospheric pads there are very good. Then the choirs start.. I like them, but not a lot. They're good, but in my opinion they could have been a bit fuller.. A very slight chorus or a bit of reverb on them might help. The transition from the choirs to the xylophone is nothing really special...
But what comes after that makes more than up for that, the choirs work really good here! Sounds a bit like a cyan monkey with the xylophone still in there, lol.
The bass you put in after that is delicious, really sets a dark mood. I like the ending, even if you're not really satisfied with it.
I really think you did a great job on this one, the only thing I might add is a bit more variation and breaks in the percussion department, but apart from that, you did a mighty fine job on projecting a cyan monkey into sound.
Keep it up, and check out my new track "Rip" if you have the time. Drop me a line.
Swerve.